Blog 6: Brainstorming for Long Essay 2

Blog 5: plans for revising Long essay 1

I was a little stuck on how i was going to elaborate on my first long essay. I wasn't sure how to go about finishing it because there are so many small sub-stories that intertwine with my main story and i was also feeling a little fuzzy about the details of what i already had written. After meeting with Dr. Chandler, i was able to organize my thoughts a little better and we came up with some good ideas for how to add more detail to my story.

• For my revision, I plan on describing the group of guys in my story more in depth. What they were known for at school and other people's reactions to them

• There were a few scenes i had spoke about with Dr. Chandler like a time i saw him the cafeteria that i plan on describing more so the reader can imagine things better. I will describe the look of my surroundings and the way I felt that day. 

• Something that Dr. Chandler also suggested that i really plan to work on, is a timeline. The small draft i have up is one small story of a few. The stories are spaced out over the course of a few years and initially, i didn't know if i should or even how to incorporate them in my draft without going off topic or being all over the place. Dr. Chandler suggested I make a kind of timeline out of my story and put these small stories together in chronological order and connect them to one another. I like this idea a lot and that's something i plan to work on for this story as it'll change the whole feel of it. 

Blog Post #24 Full Draft of Final Proj.

Plagiarism steadily seems to be on the rise as students today have unlimited access to the web and know their way around it. They have the luxury of typing into a search engine exactly what they’re looking for and finding countless papers up for sale, or summaries written by professionals analyzing and giving a shortened version of the finest literature. Over the years, we’ve all been told by our teachers that plagiarism is wrong and that committing such an act can lead to severe consequences. But now that we are living in an age where the web is literally at our fingertips all the time, can it be that the web helps today’s students to develop better researching skills? How do the students feel about plagiarism and its guidelines?  In an effort to dig deeper into the true definition of plagiarism, I’ll be investigating how students today really feel about it through discourse analysis, and even what positive skills they may have picked up from relying on the use of the web.

                        Over the past few years, there have been quite a few studies that have taken a closer look into the reasons students feel compelled to plagiarize. In most of these studies, teachers were asked about times they've had to deal with their students cheating, samples were examined and scholars were interviewed on their thoughts about plagiarism and why it seems to be such a big issue. In the article, “It wasn’t me, was it?” Plagiarism and the Web” By Dànielle DeVoss and Annette C. Rosati, a few stories about plagiarism and either the students confusion on the term or lack of confidence in their own work were examined from the faculty member’s perspective. But what do the students think about plagiarism and why they seem to be doing it more and more? Regardless of the findings in these studies, there aren’t any researchers who have looked through the lens of a student who is actually committing these acts. Based on an in-depth interview conducted by myself, this study will focus on how students really feel about plagiarism, and why they think their peers (and themselves) are so compelled to use the web for "help", through their own perspective.

Plagiarism in a Digital Age

 Because of the many complexities that accompany plagiarism, researchers try to look at several angles and analyze different stories to come up with a reason why.  In “It wasn’t me, was it?” Plagiarism and the Web” By Dànielle DeVoss and Annette C. Rosati , plagiarism is scrutinized in comparison to modern day issues where the internet serves as the main source of students’ academic dishonesty. Both teachers believe that new research spaces, such as the internet, has led to deeper complexities when it comes to plagiarism. They share several stories on their experiences as teachers and dealing with students who have committed acts of plagiarism, and share their ideas on tools that they believe will help their students to do more appropriate research with and without the use of the internet.

            In Annette Rosati’s story, her Intro-to-Literature student’s didn’t seem to quite understand what fell under plagiarism and what didn’t. After her efforts to teach plagiarism in depth in the beginning of the school year, she tells a story about a time she read through various papers on the infamous “King Lear” that all seemed just as familiar as the last. Out of curiosity, Rosati searched the web for whatever came up for “King Lear” and discovered three of her students had downloaded previously written papers straight off the web and handed them in as their own. In the next class, she asked those three people (without calling them out) to turn themselves in during her office hours if they wanted to save their grades. To Rosati’s surprise, a student who was not suspected of plagiarism came to her office asking if it was him. She asked him why he might have thought this, and he explained that he used Cliff Notes to gain a clearer understanding of the text. Rosati told him that was not plagiarism and he was free to go. But to her surprise, a total of 14 other students stood outside of her door.

            In the article, they also give us several reasons as to why they believe students plagiarize. Some of those reasons include a lack of confidence in their work, a lack of understanding the assignment, according to DeVoss and Rosati, some students may even commit plagiarism by not properly citing their sources. The reasons range from complicated to simple, such as students solely focusing on the amount of quotes and sources in their papers that they forget to incorporate their original ideas, and students simply wanting to free up time to work on an assignment for another class they may feel more obligated to.

Methods

This study focuses solely on a student’s perspective of plagiarism and the use of web for extra help. In order to dig deeper into the student’s thoughts on the subject, I conducted a short series of interviews with specific questions about my subject’s writing process and how he uses the web to formulate his papers, what he does when it comes to paraphrasing, how it helps him gather data and even how the web is used to help his looming ideas flourish into something more analytical. I recorded and transcribed my primary interview and based on my findings, decided to give a follow up interview in which I recorded and transcribed as well in order to learn more about his personal experiences when it comes to plagiarism. In addition to taking into account what my participant blatantly said his views were on plagiarism, I used discourse analysis to interpret deeper how the student feels about his (and his opinion on his peers) experiences with academic dishonesty.

Analysis of transcripts

            The interview conducted was between me and a fellow college student, J, who has survived his entire college career up to this point without ever being found guilty or even accused of plagiarism.  During the course of the first interview I was able to see how J used laughter to make different meanings. J was very honest with his answers, even when it came to the questions that revealed a bit more of his academic character. I began to notice a pattern of laughter in his more thorough answer. After analyzing my interview transcript, I’ll show you how my participant uses laughter to make different meanings.

            J and I dove right into the first interview after some very brief small talk. I asked him how he gets ready to write a big paper and he said:

          “ J: Well the first thing I usually do is write down the directions again. I like to be able to reference what I'm really being asked to do in the paper so I don't fall off track. Then I would start outlining some main points I want to get across in the paragraphs following my introduction and I go from there, really.

B: Okay, sounds really similar to what I do! So when you're done with your outline and you start to actually write your paper, when do you think it's a good idea to paraphrase?

J: I actually paraphrase a lot. I think it's always a good time for paraphrasing! (laughs) It definitely helps to add in some extra info to your paper instead of just your own made up ideas, and I think it helps because it makes your paper look a lot more accurate.”

When asked about his overall writing process, J was very stern in the beginning of his answer. There was no hesitation as he explained his usual sequence of planning. In this excerpt, J’s laugh indicated hesitation in his answer. The laugh was more nervous than of something humorous. Culturally, paraphrasing isn’t really a writing technique that is favored amongst teachers and professors, there really aren’t any set of rules as to what paraphrasing is and the concept can get a little fuzzy for most students. J is giving the impression that paraphrasing helps to mask the body of a paper by giving it a better appearance. The use of his laughter here, led me to believe J was nervous and even unsure of whether his answer was culturally acceptable or not.

            The interview continued to flow and J told me how he cites some of his sources. After explaining his logic for citing some things and leaving out others, I asked him how he avoids plagiarism altogether. His answer started with, “Well, I never copy and paste. (laughs)” It is very common throughout the student culture to believe that as long as you’re not copying material word for word, plagiarism isn’t being committed. This belief is controversial, as not copying word for word would lead to paraphrasing. J’s use of laughter after that statement indicates that he doesn’t fully believe himself and it was almost funny to him. The use of “well” in this sentence, gives the impression that not copy and pasting was good enough, in terms of not committing plagiarism.

            I proceeded to ask him one of the core questions for my interview:

“B: Do you think a lot of your peers reference the internet a lot when writing different kinds of papers to help them out with ideas?

J: Yeah for sure. There are soooooo many sites out there that can help out with ideas. I don't really see it as plagiarizing though and I don't think a lot of students do either. Like for example, it's a lot easier to do this with literature classes or pys classes, or things where it's a lot of just recapping. You can ask people online what they think and get a whole bunch of ideas and play off that. Or put your own spin on things that have already been discussed online. Message boards are a great place for this, or even yahoo answers or just some sites that professors don't really like us using (giggles). Not only is it easy but it's almost like a tool if you have writers block.”

             This time, by saying “or just some sites that professors don't really like us using” J creates a genre of sites that professors prefer their students not use for reliable information. Laughing afterwards, shows he doesn’t take that genre seriously, and also implies that students may just use them anyway.

   “B: Would you ever add these sites to your work cited page? or are these some of the sites you'd paraphrase on and just leave unknown?

J: yeah these i'd  just leave those out (laughs). I feel like once a professor sees those names on a paper, it's automatically trash.”

            In the excerpt above, not only does J’s laughter indicate that he knows leaving these sites out contribute to committing plagiarism, but the sentence that follows helps to confirm this belief. J “feels” that these sites will discredit his work. The word “trash” is a strong here, because no student wants to consider their work as garbage. Knowing that his efforts may be overlooked due to the name of a site, and not wanting his work to be “trash”, he deliberately leaves those sites out of his paper and knows this is a part of plagiarism. Clearly, he knows it’s wrong, but he’s also being very practical about his grades and kind of doesn’t care if that involves doing something that may or may not even be considered plagarism.

            J’s practicality really sets the tone for his last outburst of laughter in the next excerpt:

“B: So you're willing to take the risk so you aren't embarrassed?

J: Ummmm... It's not really about being embarrassed, I just wouldn't want to do it over because the professor thinks the info is useless. But when they don't know I get the grade. (laughs)”

It is clear that in the end, J’s laughter derives from being able to get one over on his professor and get his grade without getting caught for plagiarism. J thinks it’s funny because it’s he seems to think it is obvious this is what students do in order to please their professor. Of course, he did not say this so bluntly. But the use of laughter in his language helps to mask this serious issue into one that isn’t such a big deal.   

            In my follow up interview, I wanted to find out if students feel they need to rely on the internet or have they just learned an effective way to incorporate the use of the web in their writing process? 

B: …. So last time, I remember you said that a lot of sites “help” you with ideas and you even mentioned using the internet and paraphrasing was almost like a “tool” for writers block. Do you think you can tell me about some of the ways that using the internet has helped you positively in expanding your papers?

J: Positively like in what sense? 

B: What has it taught you? Like since you referred to it as a tool last time, What kind of skills have you picked up from it?

J: Uhhh….. Ok, I would say that while i’m surfing the web for new things to put in my paper, or like while I’m on forums or asking questions on Answers (hahaha) I think over time I learned just what to ask the other people im talking to online. Or I learned what to type into my search and which links to click on to find what I really need. Basically I feel like im getting better info because I’m asking things we didn’t go over in class or that’s not in plain sight in the book we read or something. A lot of times you can ask your professor these things but they are kinda vague because they never want to GIVE you the answer. Which I mean I get it but sometimes it’s good to see all the different responses you get, all of them right and you can pick which ones you want to draw your own ideas off. Does that make sense? (laughs)

            My data clearly shows that this student is fully aware of the negative stigma that comes along with using the web loosely to gather valid information, but it also shows how this student, and probably others, feel the internet helps contribute to their writing process in several ways. J feels that by endlessly searching the web and deeming some things and appropriate and others as not, he is learning how to identify validity in his sources in comparison to sites he considers to contain nothing with strong facts. In addition, he also feels that he is digging deeper into the assignment outside of the classroom, furthering his own knowledge on the subject, by searching for answers to questions that derive from the newfound information he is stumbling upon while using the web for help. These skills are skills that can be very beneficial to so many students in and outside of the classroom. Things only seem to get fuzzy when it comes to the definition of plagiarism, that is seemingly subject to change from teacher to institution.

            J describes plagiarism, just how most students (or anyone) would describe plagiarism. He says, “I would define plagiarism as.... taking another person's complete work or even a piece of it word for word and claiming it as your own, original idea. That is definitely plagiarism.” In the article “It wasn’t me, was it?” Plagiarism and the Web” By Dànielle DeVoss and Annette C. Rosati, unfortunately, we are never really given a definition as to what plagiarism even is. Although Rosati explains that she teaches her class the ins and outs of plagiarism, she never defines it for us.

Limitations of the Study

The limitations of my study include the fact that I only interviewed one student out of the many students out there. Due to time and the length of research required for my paper, I was not able to gather more data as it may have exceeded the requirements. If I was able to, I would interview more students from a variety of majors and even different class levels (freshmen, sophomores, juniors, seniors) and maybe even see how the ideas and thoughts on plagiarism vary between educational experience.

Conclusion

To conclude, the perspective of plagiarism to students is a lot different from that of the teacher’s. Having a closer look into the student’s mind shows us how students actually learn a lot useful skills from using the web for help. We are also better able to see how tech savvy students have a fuzzy understanding of what plagiarism is and long for some knowledge on how to use the internet’s sources efficiently while still being “safe” from cheating. In the future, further research should include seeking out effective tactics on teaching plagiarism, using the web to better help develop research skills, and possibly rethinking the criteria for plagiarism altogether so that it is more specific and up to date with the times.

Blog Post #23 Conclusion Draft

To conclude, the perspective of plagiarism to students is a lot different from that of the teacher’s. Having a closer look into the student’s mind shows us how students actually learn a lot useful skills from using the web for help. We are also better able to see how tech savvy students have a fuzzy understanding of what plagiarism is and long for some knowledge on how to use the internet’s sources efficiently while still being “safe” from cheating. In the future, further research should include seeking out effective tactics on teaching plagiarism, using the web to better help develop research skills, and possibly rethinking the criteria for plagiarism altogether so that it is more specific and up to date with the times.

Blog Post 22.5......Follow up interview

I decided to do a follow up interview and finally, after my participant and I had to keep pushing back dates and he cancelled a few times we were able to do one! I'm happy with the outcome so I thought I would transcribe it and share here as some more data work (also since I plan to incorporate this into my final project, I needed it transcribe it to pick apart some of the excerpts)

B: Hey! how’ve you been?

J: Good! Sorry for cancelling the other day there’s just mad work to be done. I’m really just trying to hang in there for the last few weeks of class.

B: Yeah I know exactly how you feel, but at least this is it for you YAY hahaha (laughter)

J: (laughs) I know! It’s so surreal, you’ll get there soon though.

B: Hopefully. (laughs) I know you’re super busy but I like really do appreciate you coming out for this last interview. So let’s just get started…. So last time, I remember you said that a lot of sites “help” you with ideas and you even mentioned using the internet and paraphrasing was almost like a “tool” for writers block. Do you think you can tell me about some of the ways that using the internet has helped you positively in expanding your papers?

J: Positively like in what sense?        

B: Like what has it taught you? Like since you referred to it as a tool last time, What kind of skills have you picked up from it?

J: UHHHH….. Ok, I would say that while i’m surfing the web for new things to put in my paper, or like while I’m on forums or asking questions on answers (I believe my participant was referring to Yahoo! answers here)  (hahaha) I think over time I learned just what to ask the other people im talking to online. Or I learned what to type into my search and which links to click on to find what I really need. Basically I feel like im getting better info because I’m asking things we didn’t go over in class or that’s not in plain sight in the book we read or something. A lot of times you can ask your professor these things but they are kinda vague because they never want to GIVE you the answer. Which I mean I get it but sometimes it’s good to see all the different responses you get, all of them right and you can pick which ones you want to draw your own ideas off. Does that make sense? (laughs)

B: Ok yeah makes perfect sense, I never really noticed but you’re totally right. Sometimes I get confused when professors are vague because they don’t wanna do the work for you. So these forums and stuff give you a bunch of examples then, right? From people who may know the subject and have their own ideas?

J: Yeah exactly it’s just a bunch of examples in my eyes. I mean, after surfing the web for a while you can see that some of those people just get their answers from other sites and and you can see who has actually put thought into their answer. Because the ones that just copy and paste are pasting things that are the first to pop up when you start your search. And no one wants to use the obvious one (laughs).

B: Okay so do you think your professor can’t see if you put thought into your answer then as well, just like you can see some people online clearly don’t?

J: well I never said I don’t put thought into my answers. I def put a lot of thought into it, I just sometimes draw from those who may be more critical thinkers on the subject. But I deff think they get my own creative juices flowing too you know like when you’re in class and someone raises their hand and has an awesome answer. I can’t write that in my notebook and use it later? Of course I can. But it was just said not written so no one will ever know (laughs)

B: Got cha. So let me ask you, do you take plagiarism seriously at all?

J: yeah of course why else would I go through all the trouble of surfing the web high and low for things that come out of people’s heads instead of things that come from an encyclopedia? (laughs)But no seriously I mean I think it’s serious, but at the same time I think it’s just a really big way of life today. The internet and talking to other people about things at all times, really using ALL your sources. If you have a health concern you don’t call your dr anymore you go on webmd and see if other people had the same syptoms. (laughs)

B: hahahaha that’s soooo true! I LIVE on webmd, I’m a little hypochondriac (laughs). But yeah you’re so right, awesome answers by the way haha…. So does this mean you feel that The guidelines for what constitutes as plagiarism should change? Be updated somehow? In what kinda ways?

J: Oh yeah hahaha (laughs) if only that could’ve happened before I graduated. (laughs)  It would be really cool if the plagiarism gods out there updated things or got more specific  (we both laugh). Or even if we had someone who uses the internet themselves but was like an expert at the rules and knew how to reach us to use it without it being “cheating” because I’m sure there’s a way. Not sure if it’s what I’ve been doing (laughs) but there deff has to be a right way and I think someone should teach that instead of making us scared of the internet all together, because I mean we’re GONNA use it…oh unless we use the library database or something. (laughs)

B:Right, I think that would be an awesome idea. Make up more aware on the ways we could avoid plagiarism and still use all our sources out there even if they are so “credible” right?

J: Right like show us how to navigate safely because the internet shouldn’t just seem like it’s totally off limits, and that’s how it feels a lot of the time.

B: So do you think that students are unaware of what plagiarism even is? Why or why not?

J: yeah I do and I think some professors don’t even ko what it is (laughs) because how can I be wrong in class A but in class B it’s okay? I personally think no one REALLY KNOWS what it is, just don’t copy and paste (laughs)

B: haha! okay. Well I think that will wrap it up honestly, I think I got all the data I need. Youv’e been a reall awesome participant thanks soooo much!!!

J: (laughs) No problem it was fun. I never really knew I thought all these things till you asked me anyways hahaha

Blog Post #22

In the last class, I tried to read more into my article. I officially decided to use the "It wasn't me, was it?" article Dr. Chandler suggested to me.


I also came up with a little outline on how I want to set up my final project and tried to really focus on what I would incorporate in the discussion and findings part since it seems to hold the most weight (60-70% of the paper) some points I am exploring are:

• How I used discourse analysis to interpret how the student feels about plagiarism. I used this for my short analysis project and think I have a lot of good information and based on some of the new info I have from my follow up interview I am excited to expand this!
• I also think that I would like to talk about how my information is more valid because my subject felt more comfortable disclosing things with a fellow student.                                                                     

I'm just not sure of the last point would have a lot of information for me to expand on and feel a little stuck on some more findings I can incorporate. I re-read the article in class, and I also did a follow up interview this past weekend. I would love some suggestions on where else I could take this project.                                                           \

Blog Post 21 -Brainstorming/Some things I did in class

Today in class, I tried to really think about what my focus would be on because there are so many aspects to plagiarism. I also worked with Dr. chandler to try and open up my intro. Here is some brainstorming for my project on things like the intro and some possible points for a body:

• For my intro, I want to try and add in the fact that my participant may expose more on how he may use the internet to help him with work because we are both students. What's different about my research and the research I've seen, is that my research is conducted by peer to peer making things more comfortable to discuss.
• Dr. Chandler gave me a great idea of adding in how I used discourse analysis to interpret how he really feels about plagiarism
• We also said  he's text savvy 
• I am also reconsidering using my short analysis info in my big project. *Although I was really happy with my short analysis project, I wasn't so sure I wanted that to be my main focus for our big project. Now I feel I can use it as a main point in figuring how "students really feel about plagiarism".